The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

The diagram depicts the manufacturing process of coffee and its preparation for further consumption at marketplaces such as supermarkets and shops.

Overall, there are eleven steps contributing to the production of coffee, starting with picking the coffee beans and ending with the packing stage.

As per the diagram, first and foremost, workers will pick coffee beans. After that, those hand-picked beans will be dried on the field and evenly spread out using rakes. When the second stage has officially finished, dried beans will then be put into a roasting machine. Following this step is when the temperature of roasted coffee beans decreases rapidly in cooling machines. The procedure then continues with the grinding stage where ground coffee will become powder. Subsequently, it will be mixed with hot water before being strained.

The mixture is then put in the cooling machine once again but at a lower temperature. This will ensure the freezing state of the mixture before being ground for a second time. Next, the water remaining in the ground frozen liquid will be taken out by using a vacuum. Finally, it will be packed into jars.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14893617021 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59565748022 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2356327488 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105316514265 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439972994577 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682523623558 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903031911221 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901094701759 0.0819641961636 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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