The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the stages of electricity generation in a hydroelectric power station. In a hydroelectric power station, there are two reservoirs with high-level and low-level.
Firstly, the water from the river is saved behind a dam, during a day, the dam gates are opened for intake, then the water can flow to the power station for electricity generation. After that, the reversible turbine operates the generator and generates electricity. Finally, electricity flows through power lines to the national grid. Furthermore, the water is saved in a low-level reservoir.
In following, during a night, water flows from the low-level reservoir to the power station. In the power station, generator pumps water into the high-level reservoir. Then, the pumped water flows to the high-level reservoir. Because of closed da gates, water is saved behind the dam.
To sum up, according to the diagram, electricity for national consumption is generated by water flows.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47682119205 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02545376203 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2095774297 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1818181818 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174962933681 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924989936443 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901677882155 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142233695097 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720797262903 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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