The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The diagram depicts the process of electricity generation in a hydroelectric power station.
Overall, it can be seen that the process by which electricity is produced in a power station is a multistep, cyclical process, which consists of 3 main stages.
In the first stage, water moves to dam from a river. In that stage water is collected at reservoir, which is called higher reservoir. There is a intake below the dam which ensures flow of water to produce electricity during daytime. Reversible turbines form the second stage and the turbines operate a generator and water is kept on the lower reservoir in the day. In the third and final stage , electricity is produced by the generator. The produced electricity then go through the power lines to the national grid, from where it is distributed among consumer.
In the night, water is pumped from lower reservoir back into high-level reservoir and intake is closed to keep water in the higher reservoir for generating electricity.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ch is called higher reservoir. There is a intake below the dam which ensures flow...
^
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in the day. In the third and final stage , electricity is produced by the generato...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, then, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03658536585 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84626606042 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542682926829 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3564743095 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7777777778 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225706295783 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1156650939 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159834583787 0.0843802449381 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205394424376 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.202510570222 0.0819641961636 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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