The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The above image illustrates the process of producing electricity in hydroelectric energy location.
Overall, it is clear that electricity has been generated in 4 diverse steps in order to have ability to be sent to national grid.
At first, river water has been conducted to a high level reservoir which is surrounded by a Dam at its right. The intake has located below the Damp is opened thorough the day which is not in other hours. Therefore, throughout the days, when gate is not closed, water has flew to power station to produce energy.
Afterwards, as much as electricity has been made, is gone to power lines and then to national grids. Also, in reversible turbines, during days it operates generator which has had access to low-level reservoir. On the other hand, at nights, it is not allowed to move to low-level part. As a result, it is pumped into high-level reservoir which is totally the opposite way of the whole mentioned procedure.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'flown'.
Suggestion: flown
...ays, when gate is not closed, water has flew to power station to produce energy. Af...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, then, therefore, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8527607362 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75560532071 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631901840491 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.8057379601 43.030603864 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161810894865 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613031268018 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493872827499 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962882883769 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195633407733 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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