The diagram below shows how geothemal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Supplied is a diagram provided reveals electricity producing method of geothermal energy.A glance at given diagram it is depicted that the process entails 5 stages,thereby, begining with pumping cold water into ground,and culminating in electricity production through Generator Turbine.
AS is illustrated,prior the other stages, cold water is pumped into ground through the injection well to somewhere in the vicinity of 4.5km of underground.In the subsequent stage,the penetrated water into the ground is heated by interior heat of rocks called Geothermal zone.Having been heated,the hot water pumpex up passing the production well to the condenser. Once heatedwater intred into condenser,it is chenged to steam;afterward released steam in wich has a rotation trend swivel the mounted turbine in wich produce electricity in eventual stage.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...y producing method of geothermal energy.A glance at given diagram it is depicted ...
^
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thereby
...picted that the process entails 5 stages,thereby, begining with pumping cold water into ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...ning with pumping cold water into ground,and culminating in electricity production t...
^^^^
Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , prior
...gh Generator Turbine. AS is illustrated,prior the other stages, cold water is pumped ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...in the vicinity of 4.5km of underground.In the subsequent stage,the penetrated wat...
^^
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...m of underground.In the subsequent stage,the penetrated water into the ground is hea...
^^^^
Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Having
...or heat of rocks called Geothermal zone.Having been heated,the hot water pumpex up pas...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...alled Geothermal zone.Having been heated,the hot water pumpex up passing the product...
^^^^
Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
.... Once heatedwater intred into condenser,it is chenged to steam;afterward released ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85365853659 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36015384796 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1914476761 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 240.0 112.824112599 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.0 22.9334400587 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0378326037961 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283661562269 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254815964322 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0370163144599 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247809982465 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 13.2329268293 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.94 61.2550243902 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.3012195122 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.54 11.4140731707 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.96 8.06136585366 148% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.