The diagram below shows how geothemal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram gives information about how electricity is produced from geothermal energy.

Overall, it can be seen that the process involves five different stages. This includes heating and condensing of cold water to generate electricity. The cycle involves both underground and above the ground stages.

First of all, cold water is collected in a chamber above the ground which is then pumped through a 4.5km long underground passage into the injection well in the geothermal zone which consists of hot rocks. At this stage, the hot rocks heat up the water before moving to the production well which is the third stage of the process. Next, the hot water is pumped up through a slightly wider passage than the first passage. This leads to the condenser chamber above the ground. Fourthly, the steam that is produced from the hot water in the condenser is used to power up the turbines by rotating which in turn will power the generator to manufacture electricity that is finally transmitted to the powerlines above the ground.

In summary, it can be seen that the process of producing electricity from geothermal energy begins with the collection of cold water which is heated up in the underground to produce steam and finally to power the generator for electricity production.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, third, well, in summary, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04672897196 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6947346621 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481308411215 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0722929707 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0690173545367 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321009945795 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499911538918 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679735701652 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582285311912 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.