The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process of producing electricity from geothermal energy.
Overall, there are five main steps in the procedure, starting from pumping cold water into the ground before being transformed into steam for electricity generation in the remaining steps.
In the first stage of manufacturing electricity, a vast amount of cold water is pumped down beneath the ground, with the depth of 4.5 kilometers. The water is then injected through geothermal zone which is known as hot rocks with the aim of converting cold water into hot water. Hot water is pumped up into a condenser and evaporates to form steam afterwards.
In the two final steps, the resulting steam passes into a generator turbine in order to implement the rotation of turbine system. After that, the amount of power from the turbine enables generator to produce electricity. Eventually, electricity generated is transferred to the electrical grid for widely usage.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31125827815 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88743240776 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6456080745 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0663929234464 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375068046026 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465630298865 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572305326726 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491702663729 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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