the diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
The diagram show how electricity is produced by geothermal energy. There are five general step in this process. First, in a big box connected underground, cold water is accumulate in order to be pumped down about 4.5 km.
After that,water is heated passing through hot rocks called geothermal zone and it is pumped up in order to be condensered in a big container. At this point, what is in a gas state and it is put in a turbine which moves it in a circle movements. Then, the final step is to use a generator in order to powered and energy can be produced. Finally energy is translated to a energy towards.
In summary, the geothermal power plant is used is used to create energy in some steps. Heating cold water by a geothermal zone and condensering it in order to put it in a generator turbine which is who produce the energy to be used.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'steps'?
Suggestion: steps
...othermal energy. There are five general step in this process. First, in a big box co...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
...othermal energy. There are five general step in this process. First, in a big box co...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , water
... pumped down about 4.5 km. After that,water is heated passing through hot rocks cal...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... to powered and energy can be produced. Finally energy is translated to a energy toward...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...oduced. Finally energy is translated to a energy towards. In summary, the geo...
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Suggestion:
... In summary, the geothermal power plant is used is used to create energy in some...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'is used'.
Suggestion: is used
...In summary, the geothermal power plant is used is used to create energy in some steps. Heating...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44230769231 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7117354599 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532051282051 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1893781787 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285546978616 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12952188596 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14355445221 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198615166669 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560797284343 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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