The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

The diagram illustrates information about the geothermal power plant that has been producing electricity by different processing under water.

At the beginning of the picture, we can see that a cold water pump installed under 4.5 km. then, it pressurizes the water to become hot through a geothermal zone. After that, the water is reached up by the hot water pump that linked up with a condenser. Afterward, condenser makes steam to pressurize turbine power and then, turbine generates the generator in order to produce electricity. Eventually, generator makes power by using turbine power.

In short, electricity has been produced by a geothermal power plant through varies system in different stages.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 598.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 111.0 196.424390244 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38738738739 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.24586718041 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89137263447 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0094987962 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4285714286 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159032916822 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793501936761 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782919009691 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149457030006 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068249120508 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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