The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram depicts the process of instant noodles production that consists of 8 separated stages.
The manufacturing flow requires not only the usage of sophisticated machinery but also supplement of a bunch of products, such as oil and vegetables, on order to result in ready-to-eat meal.
At the initial stage, the flour is transferred by trucks to the storage silos where it is kept until supplied to mixer, being the starting point of the manufacturing. Once put in the mixer the flour is blended with water and oil in order to obtain plasticity. After that the mass is flattered into wide dough sheets by rollers and cut straight away with the help of dough strips, which transforms the dough into separated noodles disks.
The second part of the process begins as soon as the oil is added to the noodles discs to make them tastier and the disks are dried to the needed condition. The following stage is the distribution of the noodles into cups to which the vegetables and spices are added supplying the dish with healthy nutrients. Finally, once the cups are labeled and sealed, they are distributed to supermarkets’ shelves.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e distributed to supermarkets’ shelves.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, second, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91191709845 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79318346619 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59067357513 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0166769848 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121741353929 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526192594303 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725917709276 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913301434475 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842540867221 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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