The diagram below shows how orange juice is produces

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The diagram below shows how orange juice is produces.

The given pictorial diagram illustrates the way to manufacture orange juice.
Overall, it can be observed that the process of making orange juice includes various stages, beginning with collecting fresh oranges and culminating with delivering packaged oranges to the supermarkets or shops for retails.
In the initial step, fresh oranges are harvested by the farmers from the orange farm. The fresh oranges then are loaded onto the trucks or vans and transported to the factory where oranges are thoroughly washed by a machine. Later, the juice is exacted from the oranges by a squeezing machine, and the solid waste of the exacted oranges is collected and used to feed animals. Following this, the fresh juice is packaged into bottles and sold in the supermarket, or transferred to another factory by the refrigerator trucks for the evaporation process.
In the evaporation process, the fresh orange undergoes the evaporator machine where water is dehydrated. The concentrated juice subsequently is canned and delivered to the warehouse before being combined with water again in the last factory. Finally, the orange juice is packaged and distributed to the supermarkets to be purchased.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3743315508 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89762603984 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534759358289 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1977820935 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237805405704 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113286054657 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044786111117 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156681275667 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166849668417 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.3012195122 131% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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