The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertiliser (compost).
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram below shows how to make organic fertilizer from organic waste step by step.
First, a plastic container with some openings around in order to allow the air getting inside. Its volume is normally estimated at about two cubic meters. Secondly, newspaper grass and waste food are put into that plastic container, which height being about 15 meters. They are mixed together totally before being put into container. Meanwhile, some types of microorganism are classified into organic waste as catalyst for composting process. Following this, nitrogen is added to the mixture, so that the composting temperature is stable, which helps microorganism to operate at the maximum and that need to be maintain. Since moisture also affects microbial activity, water is added to the organic mixture on hot and dry weather.
After this, heat vapor is placed under plastic container and organic fertilizer is composed with proper temperature and humidity. This process takes about six months, while the mixture is often checked and stirred to ensure they do not dry out. After six months of incubation, when the organic waste decomposes completely, they will be taken to fertilize plants. This type of organic fertilizer provides nutrients for plants as well as chemical fertilizers does.
Generally, using organic fertilizers not only help plants grow and get nutrients in a healthy way, but also help organic waste not to be wasted. Therefore, it should be encourage to be widely used to help the environment become cleaner and develop a sustainable agricultural.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d together totally before being put into container. Meanwhile, some types of micr...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy way" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...only help plants grow and get nutrients in a healthy way, but also help organic waste not to be ...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...t to be wasted. Therefore, it should be encourage to be widely used to help the environme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30522088353 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70916205484 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618473895582 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2955558376 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3571428571 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127661747284 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474261114631 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603064346665 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105045097812 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819595697937 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.