The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given process illustrates how underground water is pumped out and made fit for drinking by using energy from the sun. It can be seen that mainly four steps are involved in the process.
In the first step, heat from the sun is stored using solar panels. Then this is converted to electricity. This electricity is then used in a pump which pumps out underground water. After this step, the pumped out water is made to pass through a water filter and then stored in a big water tank, which is placed on a wooden platform. There is an outlet pipe on the lower end of this water tank which has a tap attached to it from which potable water can be taken out in a movable container as and when needed.
Overall, it can be seen that solar energy, which is a renewable energy can be used very effectively to pump out water from below the ground and then filter it to convert it into safe water fit for drinking.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33918128655 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27287606267 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5230870972 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138854763606 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693347198777 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394816442172 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105803404484 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00404310542231 0.0819641961636 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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