The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The chart illustrates the different stages in the development of a samon during its life cycle.
It is evident from the given diagram that there are eight main phases in this process, which take place in three distinctive areas: river, estuary, and ocean, beginning with incubation and culminating with spawning stage.
At the first step of the process, salmon eggs are hatched in the river and young salmon emerge. Those continue living in freshwater until developing further. After moving into estuary, salmon begin their migration towards the oceans and stay there for growing into mature salmon.
Those mature samon, afterwards, go on a expedition from the oceans to spawning areas in rivers, after going through estuary. At the final stage, male and female samon will spawn eggs in river. The life cycle will then continue again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... Those mature samon, afterwards, go on a expedition from the oceans to spawning ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20588235294 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34852526796 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691176470588 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2565785332 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179262652355 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746158369378 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501432347454 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927081603389 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338367392808 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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