The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
The given flowchart illustrates the manufacturing process of how suger produced from suger cane.
Overall, the diagram has seven stages, from gowing suger canes, up to 12-18 months, to cooled and dried suger, for consuming and consumers. The total process will be more than a year, as it is obvious.
Firstly, suger canes are grow, for a year or a year and a half, then these suger canes will be harvesting, by means of industrial machine or by mannual worker. After harvesting and sorting suger canes, they will crushed by another mechanized tool for having their juice.
Secondly, the juice will pured by the Limestone filter, then this purified jouice will heated in the Evaporator to result syrup. This syrup afterwards will seperated into two phase of suger crystals and syrup in a centrifuge, and will rotated in it. Last but not least , sugar sands will be resulted from cooling and drying seperated sugar, so at the end, sugar will be ready to consume.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
... is obvious. Firstly, suger canes are grow, for a year or a year and a half, then ...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d a half, then these suger canes will be harvesting, by means of industrial machi...
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Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'crush'
Suggestion: crush
...ting and sorting suger canes, they will crushed by another mechanized tool for having t...
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Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'heat'
Suggestion: heat
... filter, then this purified jouice will heated in the Evaporator to result syrup. This...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the Evaporator to result syrup. This syrup afterwards will seperated into two...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'phase' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'phases'.
Suggestion: phases
...yrup afterwards will seperated into two phase of suger crystals and syrup in a centri...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'rotate'
Suggestion: rotate
...als and syrup in a centrifuge, and will rotated in it. Last but not least , sugar sands...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d will rotated in it. Last but not least , sugar sands will be resulted from cooli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88414634146 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47140487515 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65243902439 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4253408071 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19781177764 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857437995274 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075509715745 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125566093249 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356379305575 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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