The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram illustrates the steps and tools used in a cement-making process and how cement is used for producing concrete for construction purposes.
Overall, the diagram contains two stages, cement production and concrete production, using produced cement. The first phase is the conversion of cement using limestones and clay, and the second phase is producing concrete with cement and water, using specific equipment and tools in each stage.
As can be seen, the first stage in the production of cement is using raw materials which as mentioned, are clay and limestone, and pouring them into the crusher, then produced power will go into the mixer. After that, the heater in the rotating heater will warm up the mixed power, and then the grinder tool will produce the meant cement which will be packed in bags for further use.
The second stage is combining the resulting cement ( 15%) with water( 10%), Sand(25%), and Gravel (50 %) in the concrete mixer which rotates and mixes all the ingiradiates to produce concrete.
All in all, this concrete will be used for building and construction aims.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stage is combining the resulting cement 15% with water 10%, Sand25%, and Gravel ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05524861878 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55366859287 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2359167027 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.508811472406 0.215688989381 236% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.272340417915 0.103423049105 263% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156398299221 0.0843802449381 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307151973933 0.15604864568 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177661596396 0.0819641961636 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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