The digram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram illustrates of types and implement former in procedure of resulting cement, and the way cement use the former to generating concrete for establish construction.
Overall, the process consists of 2 others, begining with cement production and ending up with concrete production.
In term of cement production begins when the limestone and clay starting to cultivate through helping from machine and the material of the cement will be mixer and channeled in process of rotating heater. After finishing the step of heating the material will be transfer to grinder in this step all of the material will be streamroller until being of cement. The final step from the process of making the cement is doing package and should be sorting by the weight or another criteria.
Furthermore, in concrete production upshot by cement will be manner as a result being concrete. First step, as much 15% of cement should be poured on the concrete mixer and combination with 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% from gravel, all of the items go down to concrete mixer. After a few hours the item will be mixed and generating some concrete to establish some construction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hanneled in process of rotating heater. After finishing the step of heating the mater...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ill be transfer to grinder in this step all of the material will be streamroller until bei...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 232, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...% water, 25% sand, and 50% from gravel, all of the items go down to concrete mixer. After ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71229542721 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533678756477 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3430046997 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.625 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221066123785 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112113658987 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612508217631 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15324504302 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515283750773 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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