The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing including process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment
The given flow diagram demonstrates the stages of consumer goods involving the feedback process to previous stages for adjustment.
to begin with, the initial step for manufacturing goods is to collect raw materials, and manufactured components. after that, research on product is conducted, and design is made further sending it to planning production. then, products are assembled to send for inspection.
when inspection is done the next stage in manufacturing is testing where product pass through various tests.
Moving further, testing process send feedback to design of products. after then, packing is done so eventually, they are dispatched.when processes are completed, company sale their goods whereas giving results back to market research which further give information to packinpacking area, and advertising. It also gives feedback to design sector about products outcome.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: To
...ess to previous stages for adjustment. to begin with, the initial step for manufa...
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Suggestion: After
...materials, and manufactured components. after that, research on product is conducted,...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Then
...ther sending it to planning production. then, products are assembled to send for ins...
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Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s are assembled to send for inspection. when inspection is done the next stage in ma...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... are assembled to send for inspection. when inspection is done the next stage in ma...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...ss send feedback to design of products. after then, packing is done so eventually, th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dispatched.when processes are completed, company sale their goods whereas giving ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79389312977 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03753493732 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671755725191 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.3528690595 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210895910883 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819371997289 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091922152855 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138455492073 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899050750024 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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