Essay topics:
The diagram describes how sports shoes are made.
The flow chart illustrates how shoes are manufactured and latter sent to the outlets. The process envolves eight steps, which takes 18 months to be completed.
This process starts with making computerised design for the product. As per that, leather from the tennary or fabric from the mill is fetched to the production unit along with the rubber from elsewhere. The process moves and the upper part of the shoe is sown after the rubber sole is prepared. These two are now ready to be glued together; followed by lacing.
After the production finishes, the production is then packed into cartons ( containing 12 boxes of shoes). These are further transformed to the container having the
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lued together; followed by lacing. After the production finishes, the produ...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e production is then packed into cartons containing 12 boxes of shoes. These are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 579.0 965.302439024 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 115.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0347826087 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.27472217062 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55282193092 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678260869565 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 168.3 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2912939744 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.375 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0631109573559 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287170940824 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545703530392 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0450017047376 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045048169381 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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