The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks
The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks
The process provides materials and equipment in the manufacture of carbonated beverages.
Overall, there are 5 main steps in the process of making carbonated drinks, starting with the cleaning step and ending with the delivery to several supermarkets.
The process commences when raw water is collected from households and transferred into a small pipe. At this stage, collected water is filtered and softened by the use of chemical substance. Then, the clean water is pumped into the electric heaters which are mainly responsible for cooling.
The next step of the process begins when water is delivered through the cooling pipe and reached a large machine for carbonating stage. During this stage, carbon dioxide is added to the water mixture. At the following step, carbonated water is sent to a massive mixing tank where it is mixed with different colors, flavors or syrups. After being filtered for the second time, the final mixture is filled in bottles or cans. Then, the products are packaged carefully before being delivered to the supermarkets.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28729281768 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68230763976 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596685082873 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4698321523 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298934226059 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112653483133 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208548884373 0.0843802449381 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281743848202 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.361883454794 0.0819641961636 442% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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