The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram illustrates the process of generating electricity by using geothermal energy. overall, electricity production has five stages.

The stored cold water is pumped down to a depth of 4.5 km to the injection well as a first step. Then, this water surpasses the geothermal zone, which is surrounded with hot bricks to convert cold water in to hot water before reaching into the production well.

In the next stage, we can see that, the hot water is pumped into a condenser, located on the ground, where steam is generated. This steam, finally makes the turbine to rotate in a circular motion, thus electricity is being produced and stored in the generator in last stage. Last but not least, towers has been distributed tis electricity to the various parts.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...electricity by using geothermal energy. overall, electricity production has five stages...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, then, thus, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 640.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 129.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96124031008 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69609238116 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643410852713 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8460669958 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4285714286 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0857733980878 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449302624243 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788742296721 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715249049139 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638218621805 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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