The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produced electricity

Essay topics:

The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produced electricity.

The given diagram illustrates the conversion of electricity from using geothermal energy. Overall, there are 5 main steps in the process, starting with injecting cold water and ending with electricity is being generated.

The process begins with water, which is cold, is being pumped down a 4.5-kilometer pipe into the injection well deep in the ground. Then the water, following the flow, goes through a space called geothermal zone. The zone is designed with hot rocks surrounding it, as well as lying parallel to the ground surface. After flowing through the hot rocks zone, the water, which is now hot, reaches the production well, the last stage underground, before being pumped back up to the ground surface through a pipe the same length as the cold water pipe.

Up on the surface, the hot water reaches the condenser, which turns hot water into steam. The steam is led through a small pipe into the generating zone. Here, the steam rotates the turbine, which in turn, powers the generator to produce electricity. In the final step, electricity is transferred to a geothermal power plant, ready to be utilized.

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Average: 7.2 (8 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01069518717 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61403808612 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9493047777 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0836345609113 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464153283255 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699429095333 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705828753487 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041753066176 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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