Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions on matters affecting them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, it is argued that letting children decide on their own wills on daily activities would make them become selfish, whereas some people think it would be beneficial in the children's development process. While I accept there are persuasive arguments in favor of the former, I believe that the latter also holds true to some extent.
On the one hand, children are likely to make wrong choices if they are allowed to do what they desire. Firstly, I believe that children are innocent and they are not able to tell what is appropriate from what is not. If they are let to decide, for example, what game they would be playing, they may get themselves a violent game or a game that is not appropriate for their ages, just because they are more widely advertised. Secondly, without an adult's guidance from a young age, they may start to develop unfavorable traits, which would affect them greatly in their time growing up. This theory could be exemplified by many passion crimes committed by teenagers who lack parental guidance during their time as kids.
On the other hand, allowing children to think and choose for themselves could be influential during their growth. As parents or adults may not always be present at the time needed, it is crucial for children to be able to mature a right sense of decision-making. For instance, they could be taught to choose a healthy dish instead of fast food in their diet. Moreover, it is also important for children to develop their sense of individuality in order to embrace their uniqueness and to stand out in our colorful world today. Many plus-sized models who are not conscious of what people think they look like could be a perfect example embodied this theory.
By and large, while I support the fact that self-centered individuals could be created by allowing youngsters to decide for themselves freely too much, I also believe that is it crucial in a child's development to be able to make their own choices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81415929204 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61288337416 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513274336283 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.568675815 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.538461538 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235026524705 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935206608734 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541308173613 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161238251651 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422432391715 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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