The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The process diagram illustrates how five tea types are made of tea leaves process. Overall, there are different steps that are followed for the production of each tea type.
To begin with, for the production of the first type, the tea leaves were rolled. After that, they go through the drying process, where the oven assists in it. To create the third tea type, first of all, the tea leaves are inserted into the rolling machine. Following that, they undergo a slight fermentation and finally, they are dried into the oven.
According to the process diagram, the production of the forth tea type is analysed through three steps. Firstly, the tea leaves are put into the rolling machine. The next step is to ferment fully the tea leaves and last of all, the tea leaves are placed onto the oven for drying.

The production of the last type of tea begins with the crashing process, where the tea leaves turned into smaller pieces. In the subsequent stage, the tea pieces go through a full fermentation process and in the end, they are placed into the oven so as to dry.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. To begin with, for the production of the first type, the tea leaves were roll...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... the end, they are placed into the oven so as to dry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, third, as to, first of all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64736842105 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25644659732 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.827649461 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2727272727 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389516954087 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190344875973 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113232377359 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297227216746 0.15604864568 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595468719351 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, third, as to, first of all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments