The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
The given picture depicts various stages in the life of a honey bee.
A glance at the diagram reveals that a honey bee egg goes through six phases which last for a little more than a month to become mature.
At the beginning of the life cycle, one to two eggs are laid by female bees every three days. In the period of around one week and a half, the eggs hatch and become five - day bees, before reaching the age of one week and then nine days. In general, it takes the nymphs every two days’ time to get to the next stages of life, in which it molts three times to make way for new growth.
Once these immature steps are completed, the nymphs turn into young adult honey bees. There are still four days more for the bees to go through before reaching their full maturity, in which the size of the bees increases many times compared to that of the newly-hatched. From here, the life cycle starts all over again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The given picture depicts various stages...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29885057471 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96421870016 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3877862998 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267816377995 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118646235059 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822373313281 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180776217313 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071880387858 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.