The diagram shows the life cycle of the silk worm and stages in the production of silk cloth
Taken a glance at these two figures, denote a four-phase silk worm's life cycle besides the six-step process that should be carefully followed so as to produce cloth that is made of silk.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is evident from the information provided that at first phase of silk worm's life, they are just some eggs, layed out of moth that turn into an adult moth after several month, this is the time that the cycle has completed and starts to repeat again. In addition it is obvious from the second diagram that the fundamental material for making silk cloth is the silk worm's cocoon that is ready to use at fourth stage of the cycle.
As is clearly illustrated by the cycle, first of all, within ten days the silk worm's eggs hatched into silk worm larva, which earns its growth through mulberry leaf. Following this, after four to six weeks a combination of silk thread as well as larva emerges out of a single larva that alters to a cocoon after three to eight days. Ultimately, it takes 16 days that a moth can appear out of a cocoon.
As can be seen from the second diagram, it is apparent from the data supplied that at first an appropriate cocoon should be picked up to boil in a container of water. After extracting the boiled-cocoon, the silk thread has unwinded from 300 to 900 meters length, then at last stage, silk clothes can be woven using twisted as well as dyed silk thread.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ocess that should be carefully followed so as to produce cloth that is made of silk. ...
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... produce cloth that is made of silk. Looking from an overall perspective, it ...
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...e eggs, layed out of moth that turn into an adult moth after several month, this ...
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...oth that turn into an adult moth after several month, this is the time that the cycle has co...
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...t the cycle has completed and starts to repeat again. In addition it is obvious from the sec...
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...ompleted and starts to repeat again. In addition it is obvious from the second diagram t...
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...to use at fourth stage of the cycle. As is clearly illustrated by the cycle, ...
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...t a moth can appear out of a cocoon. As can be seen from the second diagram, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, look, second, so, then, well, as to, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52918287938 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32067815386 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 106.607317073 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5495274507 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.125 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 5.23603664747 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359004288912 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163634529634 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117310970927 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23360802458 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062742455582 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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