Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought that the leading technique for some unfavorable conditions such as job dissatisfaction or scarcity of money,would be just go along with it,others on the contrary,harshly critique the former belief as they are of the opinion that it is far more greater to make effort besides develop this current state.To follow the later opinion, I would believe Depending on how much any people put effort,there are undoubtedly countless ways to evolve any undesirable conditions.
First,Let me put a light on the ideology of just welcome the unpleasant situations like as,being unsatisfied with your career, without making any efforts.I strongly believe that if human think that some negative aspects of life such as,privation ,would be long with them untill the end of their lives with no power existing to change this sub-standard state,losing their hope as well as considering the meaning of life pointless will be the first thing they will absolutely struggle with.Furthermore and equally importantly,highlighting the fact that people are alive definitely due to achieve their wish,if they thought that there would be no routes for reaching their desires,they might be a tired,depressed as well as bored public that could not hold any hope alight in their hearts.what is more,I genuinely understand that some people are facing some difficulties making ends meet,consequently they are living from hand to mouth specially in third-world countries,nevertheless,I would argue that welcoming all these adverse points without trying for a change,would be a huge mistake to make for these people ,what I hold as a belief is as a human we've got some rights,that should be never ignored even by ourselves.
Now we will hurtle towards the latter opinion which is, making effort or evolving some dissatisfied states such as having limited financial means, would be a more suitable solution to these situations.I would support this view point strongly as I believe there are some productive techniques that they can be applied to our life for a better change. It is apparent that if we want to see any positive advancements in our lives ,we should try hard for that depending on our purpose to fulfill.For instance, every year the number of successful African runners ,which is reported by news has been sharply increasing.To clear things up these runners from Africa ,that is a inferior country with limited financial means,are super great and their success relies on a simple answer that is putting lots of effort in what they want as an aim of their lives,they did not accept their unpleasant situations,they wanted to change it and they did.thus, considering our abilities and try for a better life it is not impossible for any one who are making effort for fulfilling their desires.
By way of conclusion,people hold varied opinion about whether accepting the unpleasant situations such as poverty or enhancing these situations to a better one,I would support the latter belief as I am of the opinion that we as a human have all the abilities to change any nuisance states to a finer one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, third, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 7.0 414% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 1.00243902439 1696% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 3.15609756098 602% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 70.0 5.60731707317 1248% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2597.0 965.302439024 269% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 507.0 196.424390244 258% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12228796844 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 3.73543355544 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19919523705 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 106.607317073 249% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522682445759 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 803.7 283.868780488 283% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 1.53170731707 914% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 101.0 22.4926829268 449% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 335.706181057 43.030603864 780% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 519.4 112.824112599 460% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 101.4 22.9334400587 442% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.6 5.23603664747 565% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 1.69756097561 2474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158790493569 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111544992459 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530771974974 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121675140588 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451885426881 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 53.4 13.2329268293 404% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -31.04 61.2550243902 -51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.51609756098 262% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 42.7 10.3012195122 415% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.6 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.48 8.06136585366 155% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 40.7170731707 302% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.4 10.9970731707 386% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 43.0 11.0658536585 389% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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