Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are split opinions about the situations. Few individuals believe that people should always be ready to welcome inpleasant circumstances. Such as an unsatisfactory Job or shortage of money. while, another group of thinkers supports that people should learn from this situation and make it more preferable. However, both has its own prons and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both the opinions would be discussed further.
Examining the former opinion, the primary arguments the supporters would put forward is practice self compassion. Treat yourself with kindness and understanding during this difficult time. Remind yourself that it is okay to struggle and that you doing the best you can. In addition, they also believe that staying in un pleasant situation allows people to avoid risk. This is because when a person makes a change things may not turn out the way they thought he would. As a result, they even lose what they had. For example, if people quit the corporate job they hat but fail to find new one, they will even lose the income their old job provided.
On the other hand, the later view suggests that people may quit their job when they use un-satisfied. This is because bad situations are more challenging. As a consequence, working hard in these circumstances gives us more happiness and help to archive goal of our life. In addition, they also believe that difficult situations help to develop our personal growth. Facing and working though situations helps us to develop resilience, problem- skill und emotional maturity. Furthermore. the main reason for this is creates opportunities for learning innovation. They force you to think outside the box, explore new perspectives, find alternative approaches. This mindset can lead to breakthroughs, discoveries, personal or professional advancements.
To conclude and give my opinion. I would say that later view point is most appropriate to deal with this situation. In a big picture, trying to improve a bad situation has several benefits such as it is to bring more happiness, well-being and personal growth. It enhances our problem solving skill and helps to make our relationship better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome inpleasant circumstances. Such as an unsatisfactory Job or shortage of money....
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Suggestion: While
...nsatisfactory Job or shortage of money. while, another group of thinkers supports tha...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
... problem- skill und emotional maturity. Furthermore. the main reason for this is creates op...
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Suggestion: The
...ll und emotional maturity. Furthermore. the main reason for this is creates opportu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, mind you, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 5.60731707317 838% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 965.302439024 191% => OK
No of words: 352.0 196.424390244 179% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23011363636 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91619421966 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 106.607317073 200% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605113636364 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 283.868780488 193% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 8.94146341463 280% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5885011849 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.64 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.08 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264785233409 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693099724992 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080205895974 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163323592449 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705751900424 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 40.7170731707 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome inpleasant circumstances. Such as an unsatisfactory Job or shortage of money....
^^
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...nsatisfactory Job or shortage of money. while, another group of thinkers supports tha...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... problem- skill und emotional maturity. Furthermore. the main reason for this is creates op...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ll und emotional maturity. Furthermore. the main reason for this is creates opportu...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, mind you, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 5.60731707317 838% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 965.302439024 191% => OK
No of words: 352.0 196.424390244 179% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23011363636 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91619421966 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 106.607317073 200% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605113636364 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 283.868780488 193% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 8.94146341463 280% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5885011849 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.64 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.08 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264785233409 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693099724992 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080205895974 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163323592449 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705751900424 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 40.7170731707 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.