It is true that, in this contemporary era, situations are being got the worst day by day at an unprecedented rate in all over the world. However, number of masses introspect that it is a good to accept a critical conditions like, less money or unsatisfactory job. Whereas, others contemplate that it is superior way to endeavour and ameliorate such situations and I am totally agreed with this Statement.
To commence with, we should keep focusing on our goals whatever we want to do in our life. For example, christiano Ronaldo was born in poor family and he was not able to eat proper food. Nevertheless, he used to do job as a sweeper for money but right now he is a wealthy person because of his hardwork and dedication. Last but not least, people must acquire new skills for achieving something great in their life and start finding new jobs from where they can easily raise their standard by their hardwork.
Looking at the other view, there are overabundance of situation where we cannot do anything. First and foremost, inflation rate and unemployment rate are being increased nowadays. Furthermore, finding new job is also not an easy task. Additionally, people are having to do unsatisfactory job because if they leave their job so they would have to confront some problems until they get new job like, bills, grocery item in their home. Another reason could be, there are some conditions like, untimely death and serious illness which cannot be stopped by us so it is better to accept this conditions. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that more than 52% people in India are facing problem due to lack of employment and inflation.
On a concluding note, although, there are plenty of situations which we can accept, I personally opine that we must give our 100% towards our goals or for improving in our conditions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, whereas, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 5.60731707317 696% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 965.302439024 160% => OK
No of words: 320.0 196.424390244 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8125 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79832539209 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 106.607317073 181% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603125 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 283.868780488 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7663569327 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186754426607 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592208658835 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435510928951 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110334014154 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534012315495 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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