Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people hold the view that accept a negative situation is preferable when necessary, while others are not willing to stuck in such situations and hope to improve.
Admittedly, both of the opinions are acceptive. Based on my knowledge, some people prefer to remain current unsatisfied situations. I think two explanations can account for this kind of decision. The first is some people are not that aggressive in such a competition-centered society. That is to say, even the situations may not friendly to them, they can still remain a peaceful mind, for example ,they choose to give up a higher wage to maintain the work-life balance. Secondly, one's talent and ability sometimes have boundaries, in which case, it's beyond ability for some people to improve his situations, thus you can't say it's unwise for them to choose to stand still.
On the contrary, for those people who always want to enhance the situations, their pursuits are also valuable and logical. I believe that many can receive great feeling of satisfactory from progress-making, from the success of some kinds of competitions. Our benefit-driven nature encourages us to try the best to get to a higher level, regardless of the difficulties. In many vivid cases, addicts succeed to give up using drugs and take the responsibilities to feed a family; the handicapped overcome difficulties and fulfill their life's goals. The willing to improve negative situations can sometimes not only gain a temporary benefit, but also can change one's life.
However, comparing to ancient times, we can't deny that every day we are standing in a more developed and more challengeable society. Man's will to improve and change foster the innovation and revolution, and create glorious material civilization. So, to conclude, I must say that for everyone the most priority is to get bad situations improved, in which way our civilization makes progress. But the balance must be paid attention to, sometimes acceptance is always an option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example, i think, kind of, on the contrary, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 965.302439024 173% => OK
No of words: 324.0 196.424390244 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16358024691 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08311397037 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 106.607317073 181% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595679012346 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 283.868780488 190% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6592146406 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5625 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215909225309 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645598870045 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599766484457 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137405738411 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068930584679 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 40.7170731707 209% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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