The following appeared in a letter sent by a committee of homeowners from the Deerhaven Acres to all homeowners in Deerhaven Acres Seven years ago homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community s yards should | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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The following appeared in a letter sent by a committee of homeowners from the Deerhaven Acres to
all homeowners in Deerhaven Acres.
"Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on
how the community's yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be
painted. Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville. In order to raise property
values in Deerhaven Acres, we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and house
painting."

In this letter author has concluded that to raise property values, we must imposed our own set of constraint on how landscaping and colosr of house because average property value have tripled in brookville due to adopting restriction on the landscaping and paint of house. However, while conclusion drawn by homeowner committee is not conclusive enough. Futhermore, it hold several unfolded assumption that if not substained will dramatically weaken the persuasion of the letter. Thus the following question must be asked.
Firstly, author stated that seven year ago Brookville community adopted this method. So it can possible that at that time people like similar kind of house near by them. What if the recent perception of the people get changed, people like architect their own houses by own rules and one’s choice of color for house. In this case author is not able to provide evidence that bolster this claim, so it weaken the conclusion of the letter.
Secondly, committee of homeowner presumes that by imposing restriction on the architect of landscape and color of house will exhibit same result as shown in Brookville. It may possible that are other factor that causes the increment in valuation of the property not putting constraint in the way house should look. It possible that Brookville show increase in the property value because the Brookville have became center for developing. It may also possible that due sudden rise in the population people demand for house has increased. Thus above assumption must be warranted by author to be conclusive.

Lastly, it assumed that the property value in Brookville and deerhaven is same. It plausible that the seven year ago property valued of Brookville is low compared to deerhaven which was pick of the price of property. Thus, property value of housing in the deerhaven cannot be increased more. If the above scenario proved to be true, then author assertion will significantly hampered.

Thus ,conclusion drawn by author that value of property can be raise by implying rule on landscape and color of house is based on many assumption. Moreover, a lot of detail in presenting his argument, most of them remain unwarranted, some of the include alike mindset of both public of city, present price of house of deerhaven is not potentially high. Hence this assumption must be warranted for the conclusion to be effective.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 371, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'holds'?
Suggestion: holds
...s not conclusive enough. Futhermore, it hold several unfolded assumption that if not...
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Line 1, column 482, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ly weaken the persuasion of the letter. Thus the following question must be asked. ...
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Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... time people like similar kind of house near by them. What if the recent perception of ...
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Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ouse. In this case author is not able to provide evidence that bolster this claim...
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Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'weakens'?
Suggestion: weakens
...evidence that bolster this claim, so it weaken the conclusion of the letter. Secondly...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... on the architect of landscape and color of house will exhibit same result as sh...
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...the architect of landscape and color of house will exhibit same result as shown ...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...perty value because the Brookville have became center for developing. It may also poss...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
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...ille have became center for developing. It may also possible that due sudden rise ...
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Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... people demand for house has increased. Thus above assumption must be warranted by a...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e is low compared to deerhaven which was pick of the price of property. Thus, pro...
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Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'hamper'
Suggestion: hamper
...hen author assertion will significantly hampered. Thus ,conclusion drawn by author th...
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...ion will significantly hampered. Thus ,conclusion drawn by author that value of...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'many assumptions'.
Suggestion: many assumptions
...andscape and color of house is based on many assumption. Moreover, a lot of detail in presentin...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cape and color of house is based on many assumption. Moreover, a lot of detail in...
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Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ument, most of them remain unwarranted, some of the include alike mindset of both public of...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ost of them remain unwarranted, some of the include alike mindset of both public of city, p...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e of deerhaven is not potentially high. Hence this assumption must be warranted for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 391.0 441.139720559 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75578028839 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 204.123752495 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493606138107 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.626300459 57.8364921388 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.05 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.55 23.324526521 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.70786347227 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.25449101796 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157173339959 0.218282227539 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509549495571 0.0743258471296 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058527777217 0.0701772020484 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895439614733 0.128457276422 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421546019821 0.0628817314937 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.3799401198 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments