"We learn through direct experience; to accept a theory without experiencing it is to learn
nothing at all."
The statement claim that the learning is best understood when we experience which I completely agree. Learning is process acquiring knowledge and implementing to understand better and to have cognitive knowledge. However merely depending on theory will not enhance your in depth knowledge for a particular domain.
Firstly ,individual get better understanding of subject when it experiment on hand rather than simply based on theory. For instances,when learning to play cricket just by going through cricket manual will just scintillate the rules of the game and cricketing shots. But to play the cricketing shots one have to practices with ball and bat to get know when to hit ball and various other factor that depend like pitch ,quality of ball and many to play cricket.
Secondly, learning through the experiences shows that ability to understand and reasoning get developed than through rely on theory. Whereas sometimes theory is as much important as the experience like in experimenting chemical reaction. if chemical reaction stated that it will causes harsh consequences If it get implemented so it is better not put in action.so by playing cricket can develop synchronization of your bat with ball coming toward you.
Moreover, it is observed same with student that group of student learning physic through only book and implementing the same in lab or in real life are likely to understand than the group of student which
However, in some case experimenting can became costly so theoretical aspect more importannt must be well understood like what are consequence ,it’s feasibility. For example in nuclear weapon making theory should be sound enough to carry out experiment because experimenting nuclear weapon cost huge which can not be experimented many time. so in this type domain theory plays vital role. some theories can not be learned by experiment so we have to accept them mentally such as the Big Bang theory. Scientists could propose the Big Bang theory with evidence from cosmology and natural patterns, while without experiencing this proposal.
In conclusion,the particular thing is properly learned when gaining depth knowing of theory and then experience it by implementing in the action. Theory help to get superficial understanding while experience give the overall knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37534246575 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95387700808 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545205479452 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8960231166 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.625 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268928441524 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999976664635 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689730299074 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141899040092 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550717388315 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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