An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Author of argument claim that the ailing patient should be given the doctor's record of patient to examine the doctor abilit so one can see the doctor will able to treat his or her disease or the medical problem,which I certainly refute. Ailing patient should not given access to doctor's file previously treated patient.
Firstly,it will be very inappropriate or morally wrong if the one medical record is given to the person or patient without consent. There can be possibilities that person has to keep his disability surreptitous to society.In that case doctor is breaking the trust of patient who has confessed the medical problem to him and trusted him.It will also demoralize the patient if the treatment of the problem is very painfull and has to tolerate many problem in that recovery and it can be possible that see the patient decided not to go for treatment and eventually will this exacerbated the problem in upcoming time.
Secondly,if one is given the record of doctor's treated patient there can be different approach to treat everyone . Then ailing patient will make misconception in mind that patient with similar the problem is treated in some number of days.Therefore,he also believed that he must been treated in same number of days.This will causes the problem for the doctor if result is not seen in the same number of days.Perhaps,there can also be possibilities that technique used for afflicted patient is not congenial to the ailing patient in treatment and ailing patient will question the doctor integrity.
Lastly,if doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patient is given to ailing patient with proper consent of the afflicted patient can be some what useful.Ailing patient will get to know the how long treatment will last and what are stages of that problem and consequences of that treatment and expenditure in medicine. Moreover,what changes will be seen in the body and lifestyle to adopt while recovery from the disease like sleeping, daily diet and etc.
In conclusion, records of doctor pastly treated patient should not given to the similary ailing patient.It will causes the problem for both doctor and patient. If the doctor is willing to give record of patient he must take consent from the that patient.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... his disability surreptitous to society.In that case doctor is breaking the trust ...
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... medical problem to him and trusted him.It will also demoralize the patient if the...
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...em is very painfull and has to tolerate many problem in that recovery and it can be possible...
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...he problem in upcoming time. Secondly,if one is given the record of doctors trea...
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...treated in some number of days.Therefore,he also believed that he must been treated...
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...ust been treated in same number of days.This will causes the problem for the doctor ...
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...reated in same number of days.This will causes the problem for the doctor if result is...
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... is not seen in the same number of days.Perhaps,there can also be possibilities that t...
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...hat technique used for afflicted patient is not congenial to the ailing patient i...
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...estion the doctor integrity. Lastly,if doctors record of treating similarly af...
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...consent of the afflicted patient can be some what useful.Ailing patient will get to know ...
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...flicted patient can be some what useful.Ailing patient will get to know the how long t...
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... useful.Ailing patient will get to know the how long treatment will last and what are s...
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...nt and expenditure in medicine. Moreover,what changes will be seen in the body and li...
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...m the disease like sleeping, daily diet and etc. In conclusion, records of doctor pas...
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...ot given to the similary ailing patient.It will causes the problem for both doctor...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
... to the similary ailing patient.It will causes the problem for both doctor and patient...
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...he problem for both doctor and patient. If the doctor is willing to give record of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09139784946 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80112750337 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408602150538 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.033181161 60.3974514979 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.4 118.986275619 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2 23.4991977007 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 5.21951772744 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414670740828 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.24813387658 0.0831039109588 299% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135657393164 0.0758088955206 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312397050994 0.150359130593 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113933371271 0.0667264976115 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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