An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition
There is a saying that: A doctor know the treatments but a good doctor knows what not to treat. For more than 2000 years medicine and treatment has a long history in the human civilization. Even in the dawn of human history we saw that the or shaman or healer had a very important role in their society.
The healers carried their role so gracefully to treat the sick patients. The journey from the dark of sickness to the light of cureness is based on the trust between the sick person and his/her healer. The ailing patient beleives his/her doctor and ate the ailments what has been given to him/her. The trust bonded the patients with his doctor closely. The treament is not only physical, it depends on trust source of our mind too. The famous greek doctor or healer, father of medicine Hippocrates also believed it. He wrote down the famous hippocratic oaths which is still used in the every medical school and dental school around the world. Modern medicine and medical still follows the rule of Hippocrates when they gave their treatment to their patients. More over every med student and dental student takes their vow to maintain the hippocrates rule. One of the rule is that they will maintain their patient privacy and confidentiality.
An ailing patient by definition means that a sick person who is in the under treatment of a doctor. The above issue mentioned that an ailing patient should have the access his/ her doctor's treating records of similiarly afflicted patient. Because the patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent tion to treat that medical condition. Others may find this opinion alludingb to support the patient's better treatment. But I find this idea opposing the treatment's goal like breaking the other patient's privacy and confidentiality. Moreover it will build a distrust between a doctor and patient relationship. Every profession's has it's own dignity. The doctors and teaching profession are called one the of the noble professions in this earth because through these professions you have direct chance to serve the society and humanity. This action will affect the Hippocrates oaths too along with creating injustice towards other patient's right.
The doctors are the core heart of the medical team in a hospital or any settings.A medical treatment is kind of team work comprises of doctor, patients, nurse, administrator and patients. The patient can take the assessment of doctor through third party opinion like presentation of how many patient's has been cured by his/her doctor but not disclosing the other patient's information, only implemented in any special situation like cancer treatment, genetic disease, complicates surgery like neurosurgery, stem cell repairment etc.
The doctors are the core heart of the medical team in hospital or any settings.A medical treatment is kind of team work comprises of doctor, patients, nurse, administrator and patients. The patient can take the assessment of doctor through third party opinion like presentation of how many patient's has been cured by his/her doctor but not disclosing the other patient's information, only implented in any special situation like cancer treatment, genetic disease, complicates surgery like neurosurgery, stem cell repairment etc.
In conclusion we can say that a successsful treatment always depends on the cordinated medical teamwork. the rapport between a patient and a doctor can be built on trust, empathy and sympathy. An ailing patient's treatment's success also depends on very core issue like coordinated teamwork and rapport with his doctor. So the medical institutions can improve the trustful situation and treatment success by building patient friendly and doctor friendly environment and facilities
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...een the sick person and his/her healer. The ailing patient beleives his/her doctor ...
^^^
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ilments what has been given to him/her. The trust bonded the patients with his doct...
^^^
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d the patients with his doctor closely. The treament is not only physical, it depen...
^^^
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...epends on trust source of our mind too. The famous greek doctor or healer, father o...
^^^
Line 4, column 465, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'treatments'' or 'treatment's'?
Suggestion: treatments'; treatment's
...ment. But I find this idea opposing the treatments goal like breaking the other patients p...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 505, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...treatments goal like breaking the other patients privacy and confidentiality. Moreover i...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 543, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...r patients privacy and confidentiality. Moreover it will build a distrust between a doct...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 620, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...ween a doctor and patient relationship. Every professions has its own dignity. The do...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 638, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...patient relationship. Every professions has its own dignity. The doctors and teachi...
^^^
Line 6, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...ical team in a hospital or any settings.A medical treatment is kind of team work ...
^
Line 6, column 123, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... medical treatment is kind of team work comprises of doctor, patients, nurse, administrator ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 364, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...her doctor but not disclosing the other patients information, only implemented in any sp...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...edical team in hospital or any settings.A medical treatment is kind of team work ...
^
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... medical treatment is kind of team work comprises of doctor, patients, nurse, administrator ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 362, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...her doctor but not disclosing the other patients information, only implented in any spec...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...nds on the cordinated medical teamwork. the rapport between a patient and a doctor ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so, still, third, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3157.0 2235.4752809 141% => OK
No of words: 601.0 442.535393258 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25291181364 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95129289623 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75153054613 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432612312812 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 947.7 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 17.0 4.99550561798 340% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1030265276 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.233333333 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0333333333 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419361943837 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122731949126 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128714442556 0.0758088955206 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224463773082 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120555208584 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.