People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
People’s behavior play vital role when dealing with various kind problem and it should be controlled by one .One should not driven by surrounding force to make his behavior. Human’s behavior led by external mean will some time causes harsh consequences. The statement claim that people’s behavior is driven by some external force, which I certainly agree.
Firstly, one should not instigate his behavior on basis of surrounding it be should in our control. For instance, in office the when the boss rebuke the employees. Then employees are more likely to misbehave to the colleagues or his family with the colleagues or loving one’s. Therefore, one should be indifferent to external environment. In other hand if the employee, take the criticism in correct way he will be motivated to delivered the more better work to boss. Ultimately, it’s in our hand or control how we react to external force.
Secondly, if the person is venerable to external mean for his behavior .He is more likely to act then being real in many situation which will sometime causes him loss. For, instances in class of math student having silly doubts will not asked the teacher because of student will thing other student will mock for that silly doubts. Therefore, doubt of the student remain unresolved and there can be possibilities of student of performing well on examination.
Sometime, this person’s influence of surrounding on his behavior can be advantageous. For instance, one athlete training will increase is hardwork and intensity if his coach is very strict. So, this behavior on athlete by coach will be beneficial to athlete in long run or future. Therefore, if the external force is taken into account properly in people’s behavior it can be useful in many ways.
In summary, people’s behavior are more influenced by milieu then own making. This if used in proper and correct way it can be beneficial and healthful but if not taken in correct way it can causes harsh consequence for the person due to his behavior which influenced by external means.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ance, in office the when the boss rebuke the employees. Then employees are more l...
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...ave to the colleagues or his family with the colleagues or loving one’s. Therefor...
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... the criticism in correct way he will be motivated to delivered the more better w...
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... but if not taken in correct way it can causes harsh consequence for the person due to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05847953216 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76781222537 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488304093567 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3720735285 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1111111111 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134829143899 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507702001654 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445766179669 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892143956074 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436348846074 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.