diagram shows manufacturing process of making sugar from sugarcane. summarise the information .
The diagram given display complete steps for manufacturing sugar
from sugar cane step by step. In the beginning, first step involve growing the corps of sugar cane, which takes around 12 to 18 months duration overall. Over this period of time, we need to plant the saplings, irrigate the fields timely and let them grow to become sugar cane.
Moving on, when the corps is fully grown, its ready to harvest, which is our next move in this whole process. In earlier times, harvest was done by humans. Whereas, now with help of technology, we have machines which are very beneficial in harvesting. Machines are comparatively more useful and less time consuming to use and its saves lot of human labor.
Going ahead, crushing of sugar canes and producing juice out them is part of third step. Again, this process is simplified using machines in modern days. Fourthly, we have to cleanse the juice which we have produced in third step using a limestone filter.
Further, we have to heat the filtered juice till it becomes thick and gets the consistency similar to syrup. This will be our fifth step in the process. Next we will move to our sixth step which includes centrifugation of the syrup which is product of fifth step. As a result of centrifugation, sugar crystals will be separated from sugar syrup.
Concluding this whole procedure, at the end, we leave these crystals for drying and to cool down. We achieved clean sugar crystals after all this hardwork and time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, third, whereas, after all, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83858267717 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4585503023 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0083806982 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8125 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 5.23603664747 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120535763604 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451411796596 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598989977275 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795550031179 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060965773335 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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