The diagram shows the process of growing tea for selling in supermarkets.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates seven stages in cultivating tea process for common sale, beginning with growing tea and cease with tea products purchased by customers.
First, tea seeds are grown by peasants in the area which is disposed clearly with the sun and kept for 3 years until harvested to make sure the best quality of the tea leaf. After that, the farmers collect the tea leaves carefully by hand and let them rest inside or outside the building. They are going to be left rest in the dry atmosphere and spreaded on a tray until all the leaves begin to turn yellow.
At the drying stage, it is necessary to have a drying machine which keep working for 2 hours at the temperature of 260 degree Celsius. Next, a small amount of dried tea is put into a bag which is suitable and adequate for each consumption. The tea bags then are packaged in carton boxes when they are ready for delivery to supermarkets for distribution. Tea products
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ermarkets for distribution. Tea products
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62721893491 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49433376292 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644970414201 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0269961544 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180072736492 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816096847202 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602925629302 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130128798125 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527679903669 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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