The diagram shows process of producing oxygen and carbon dioxide in human and plants

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The diagram shows process of producing oxygen and carbon dioxide in human and plants.

The given process illustrates the information about production of oxygen and carbon dioxide which is produced by human as well as plants.the process is natural and it includes something stages.

In the first stage,plant is grown under the soil, then the water is absorbed through the roots of the plant. Afterthat, the leaves of the plant faced some sunlight and those make starch with the help of water and in the presence of light. In the next stage,plants absorb the carbon dioxide in the leaves and oxygen is produced by the photosynthesis of plant for everyone.

Thereafter, the oxygen which is exhaled by trees and it is inhailed by humans as well as animals. In the last stage, the carbon dioxide is emitted by animals and individuals through breathing which is observed by plants and this process is continous in the nature.

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Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

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...on dioxide which is produced by human as well as plants.the process is natura...
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...soil, then the water is absorbed through the roots of the plant. Afterthat, the...
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... then the water is absorbed through the roots of the plant. Afterthat, the leav...
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...he water is absorbed through the roots of the plant. Afterthat, the leaves of t...
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... the next stage,plants absorb the carbon dioxide in the leaves and oxygen is pr...
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...arbon dioxide in the leaves and oxygen is produced by the photosynthesis of p...
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...e in the leaves and oxygen is produced by the photosynthesis of plant for ever...
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...ygen is produced by the photosynthesis of plant for everyone. Thereafter,...
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...ygen which is exhaled by trees and it is inhailed by humans as well as animals. I...
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...s as well as animals. In the last stage, the carbon dioxide is emitted by anima...
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... animals. In the last stage, the carbon dioxide is emitted by animals and indiv...
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...uals through breathing which is observed by plants and this process is continous ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92253521127 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68786313131 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514084507042 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9876962501 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 1.69756097561 1649% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325912587847 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153039498704 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143130745989 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240437066616 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130347463259 0.0819641961636 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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