The diagram shows the small-scale production of smoked fish
The given flow-chart illustrates the process of smoking fish.
OVERALL, There are eight stages in total, start with cleaning fish and end with deliverING to the stores.
First of all, the fish need to be cleaned carefully before be dipped into a fluid of salt and water for thirty minutes. After that, they boil the mixture in five minutes. When the earlier stage is done, lay in fish in sunshine so they will not be wet and too salty.
Secondly, we come to a stage that plays pivotal role in the final result, there are vats contain dried fish, which are made of wood. In the vat, the fish is smoked in half an hour. Then they add yellow food colouring in case that the fish color is not really eye-catching after a long time. Although the color might not affect the taste, an appealing view will absolutely make the course more scrumptious, and the price can be higher too, which is beneficial for the brand. Last but not least, the products is packed in boxes and deliver to the consumers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our. Then they add yellow food colouring in case that the fish color is not reall...
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Line 7, column 558, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in boxes and deliver to the consumers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, second, secondly, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54696132597 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22626569988 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2745464646 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156611002245 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687293053825 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586574710047 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100907011694 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479301017786 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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