The diagram shows some principles of house design for cool and for warm climate

Essay topics:

The diagram shows some principles of house design for cool and for warm climate

The given representation illustrate the information about design of house for cool, and warm climate by principles.

Overall, it is evident that in winter season is house design differ from warm season.

To begin with, that in which besieged of cool session house is made from some kind that is from building materials as well as heat loss reduction like insulation is used for it.moreover, when heat is comes from sun then enter in the room by Window.becsuse window keep front on the sunlight.

Secondly, in warm season of house design is differ from first one. Therefore, in which takes place by necessities is insulation,and through we are keep cold air in building by it. Furthermore, in second steps which is roof is overhangs for shade backside of the window. On the flip side, other house of building is differ from seconds because in which two windows are presence for passing the air when are opened . This look like as a hut shaped.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 45, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
...ndly, in warm season of house design is differ from first one. Therefore, in which tak...
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Line 8, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...takes place by necessities is insulation,and through we are keep cold air in buildin...
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Line 8, column 316, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
...e flip side, other house of building is differ from seconds because in which two windo...
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Line 8, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ence for passing the air when are opened . This look like as a hut shaped.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85889570552 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68940459676 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601226993865 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8783232518 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.23603664747 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279075843835 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129662137589 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117693387117 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203777393032 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115591996047 0.0819641961636 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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