The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since
its construction in 1960.
The diagrams illustrate how Queen Mary Hospital has changed since 1950 when It was built.
In 1960, the hospital was a building located along the main road and to the right of a shopping center. There was a car park which was located right behind the hospital building to the right of some farmland.
Twenty years later in 1980, the shopping center was demolished and replaced by a cancer center , as well as a new pharmacy. The farmland was also converted into a new nursing school, but the hospital and car park remained unchanged.
In the last year, 2000, The cancer center was extended, as a result of which the land previously allocated to the nursing school was added to it.Consequently, the car park was divited into two buildings so that It turned into a smaller car park and nursing school.
Overall, the area witnessed considerable changes and more medical facilities have been opened up over the years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: Consequently
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85443037975 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58907222082 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2683076783 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124981412736 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772951098643 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916227623339 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946253995158 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10073010816 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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