The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Essay topics:

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

The provided diagram sketches out the illustration for how to operate a wave-machine and options for where it should be installed.

A glance at the diagram reveals that the process in which a wave-machine function is sophisticated.
It is conspicuous that a wave-machine consists of two different chambers. In the first stage, water will flow into the below chamber along the wave direction. As the water level rises, air flow will be pushed upwards. At the same time, air flow from the top comes through the chamber, increasing more air pressure which rotates the turbines. The spinning of the turbines is the key to operate the electricity generator.
On the other hand, where the wave-machine is located also affect its output. It could be plainly viewed that in order to produce more energy, the wave-machine should be put away from the land. Locating the machine at where large waves are definitely will bring about higher output. But in turn, it would cost a lot to be installed. Accordingly, installing the machine at places with small waves can reduce the cost, but the result will not be as high as that at location with large waves.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89743589744 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74691866101 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579487179487 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2186476644 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5833333333 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234814373452 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907245203493 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774217483116 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161933457659 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538422497845 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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