The process diagram illustrates manufacturing of chocolate and pie chart demonstrates how the price of chocolate bar is divided into five different categories. The scale is in percentage.
Overall, process of making chocolate is lengthy and complex which consist more than six steps. It is manmade process. Where, cocoa bin plays vital role in whole process. The price of chocolate bar more accounted for cost of ingredients and overheads and least for famer.
To begin with, cocoa bins which selected for the best chocolate bar are grinding and passed to cocoa liquor and subsequently waste are also removed. Secondly, liquor divided into to two ways industrial chocolate and pressing parallel. Sugar and other useful ingredients are added into industrial chocolate at the same time pressed chocolate divided into cocoa butter and cocoa powder. Finally, industrial chocolate molded into chocolate bar and cocoa powder send to food industry.
Furthermore, price of chocolate bar divided into different categories. Where cost of ingredients and overheads and supermarket accounted for 37% and 34% respectively. Whereas, figure for tax is 15%. Also, chocolate company and farmer are claimed is 10% and 4% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... than six steps. It is manmade process. Where, cocoa bin plays vital role in whole pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53191489362 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87011339985 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9209049489 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2857142857 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251845371536 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948233387447 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806175403667 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178120295599 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639785274174 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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