the diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams represent the evolution of the silkworm and the process of silk cloth production. The life cycle spends almost 2 months to become moth. Surprisingly, before the final stages of the revolution, cocoon becomes the most reliable source to produce silk cloth.
At the day one, the mouth nourishes the number eggs. furthermore, after 10 days, the eggs evolve into larva. Around 4-6 weeks, the larva consumes mulberry to support their life. After six weeks ahead, larva cover their body with silk thread. Then, at the end of the sixth day, the larva hibernate in the cocoon. Finally, after 16 days, they wake up with the new form, the moth.
Most of all, the silk cloth creation relies on the cocoon. The fine cocoon is choose, the boiled into the hot water. Afterward, the cocoon thread is untied to 300-900 m approximately. Finally, the thread is twisted and waved into a dye.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...e, the mouth nourishes the number eggs. furthermore, after 10 days, the eggs evolve into la...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...elies on the cocoon. The fine cocoon is choose, the boiled into the hot water. Afterwa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72903225806 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38861329334 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638709677419 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 18.4599358279 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.3846153846 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9230769231 22.9334400587 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120699491358 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434536257116 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588091765025 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926492322895 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854673369853 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 61.2550243902 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => OK
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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