The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.

Essay topics:

The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.

The pictures compare some different basic characteristics in house construction for hot and cold weathers.
Overall, the designation for cool climate tends to reduce the heat loss while the structure of a house, in a warmer climate, tends to remove the heat from outside.
In the first diagram, the house is built with a thermal material that can store the temperature. Furthermore, the outside of the house is covered by the insulation layer which prevents the heat loss. Besides, the incline high-angled roof and the opening window are designed to help the house acquire more sunlight.
In the second picture, the overhanging roof is built with reflective material to block the heat from outside and is designed to create the shade for the house. By contrast, the insulation layer is constructed just below the roof to separate the inside with higher temperature from outside. Moreover, windows are closed and covered, in the daytime, to reduce the heat from the sun while it will be opened to help the house ventilation in the night.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...construction for hot and cold weathers. Overall, the designation for cool climat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02312138728 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73058836156 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543352601156 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9987980491 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.625 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216881550928 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902046737412 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497873793952 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136284739964 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316547929964 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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