The diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area

Essay topics:

The diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area.

The diagrams show the differences between a single room and a double room. In general, the rental cost of double room is slight ly higher than that of single room, followed by a lot more facilities.
looking at the size, the single room is 15 m15 square metres while the figure of the double room is 24 square metres. Besides, the single room costs $200 per week and price for the double room is $350. Both kitchens have the same acreage and facilities such as stoves, sink and microwaves. There are 2 bookshelves between kitchen and bathroom in the single room, but the double room has a table outside the kitchen. Moreover, while the double room has 2 bedrooms with a window in each room, the single room has only 1 bedroom and no window.
The centre areas of both room also have some significant differences. In the single room, there is a cubboard, while study desk and TV occupy in opposite walls. In constrast, there are 2 cubboards, a TV, extra bookshelves in the middle of the double room, which has 2 study desks and bookshelves on the other walls.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...om, followed by a lot more facilities. looking at the size, the single room is 15 m15 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, so, while, in general, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52879581152 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44064430157 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6563313305 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438224143486 0.215688989381 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199338770515 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951362481281 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312721350053 0.15604864568 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371644334056 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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