The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.

Essay topics:

The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.

The provided infographics illustrate how wave power can be used to produce electricity.
The general idea of this method is to exploit waves to push and pull the air through a column where in the middle a turbine is located. First a wave generator which consists of three parts: chamber, column and turbine must be attached at the edge of either a cliff or see wall. Then a chamber is dumped in water so as to when a wave moves towards the cliff or see wall it fills the chamber, and, on the contrary, when the wave retreats it empties the one. While one end of a column looks at the sky and the other end is attached to the chamber thereby the air can move through the column when a wave ebbs and flows. In the meantime, a turbine which is inside in the middle of the column is propelled by the air driven by the waves from the chamber so as to generate electricity.
The give diagrams show the process of generating electricity by exploiting wave power.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...wall. Then a chamber is dumped in water so as to when a wave moves towards the cliff or ...
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Line 2, column 749, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ir driven by the waves from the chamber so as to generate electricity. The give diagra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, while, as to, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36312849162 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44898003239 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513966480447 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.401087603 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270625657563 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152511040885 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151393951067 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268290061074 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167676048262 0.0819641961636 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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