The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.

Essay topics:

The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.

The given two figure demonstrate how to produce electricity throw ocean tids. It is clear see in figure the electricity are generate by ocean wind is simple procesure.
In figure it is depict sea waves flow to land side when air in chamber are flow in column bottom to up and turbine's wings sprinning to clockwise direction and due to this the electricity are produce continued.
In figure b, it is show when ocean's wave flow land to ocean side, the air in the autmosphear are pass to column up to down side due to this turbine's wings are continue sprinning in same direction and because of that the electricity are continued generated.
In Summary, the electricity production method are very simple. Airflow flows any direction the turbine wing continued move in clockwise direction and electricity are continued producing. this process are not emitting co2 so that it is good for autmosfear.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'figure' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'figures'.
Suggestion: figures
The given two figure demonstrate how to produce electricity ...
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Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'generated'.
Suggestion: generated
...clear see in figure the electricity are generate by ocean wind is simple procesure. In...
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Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depicted'.
Suggestion: depicted
... is simple procesure. In figure it is depict sea waves flow to land side when air in...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: DOWN_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'downside'?
Suggestion: downside
...he autmosphear are pass to column up to down side due to this turbines wings are continue...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e pass to column up to down side due to this turbines wings are continue sprinning i...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: continued
...own side due to this turbines wings are continue sprinning in same direction and because...
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Line 4, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... electricity are continued generated. In Summary, the electricity production met...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...nd electricity are continued producing. this process are not emitting co2 so that it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90131578947 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77690035003 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519736842105 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7383797337 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131409419716 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066857597592 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372127172688 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860014660845 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201541305263 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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