Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Now a day, Poverty and hunger are most considerable aspect in all countries. Some average person believe economy only way to solve this problems on the other hand, Some believers thinks economy growth hazardous to environment. I am completely agree with second statement and explain both views and given my opinion in coming paragraph.
First of all, Demanding economy progress more industries for this more land required due to this incline deforestation. That is directly impact on wildlife and environment. For instance, At Junagadh in Gujarat in India number of wild animal are glance on villages who build on deforestation land. Beside this number of tree are cutting it were directly influence on atmosphere and cause to grow up hot temperature on earth. Moreover, industrial's waste like dirty water and rubbish are dangerousfor water and land. This details and examples are clearly demonstrate economy growth directly impact on environment circumstances.
However, Economy growth solo cure to poverty and hunger. More factory establish need more human power that is directly decline unemployment and poverty. If people are working in companies they earn money and fulfill they families need like food and house. For example, Tata group provide job to more-than one billions people in the world that means It given food or house to 1 billions people.However, The profit made by corporations who are responsible this economy growth will trickle down in form of financial benefits to be enjoyed by the starving and needy this view justified the destruction of livelihood of millions in the name of progress.
In a nutshell, industrializationare overcome to dangerousfor environment compare to providing food and employment and reduce to poverty and hunger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36823104693 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.035725454 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624548736462 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.3559855901 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15189602752 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509704144127 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054094818579 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993375760175 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570468680124 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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