The economic growth has always been the hottest issue in our daily life. However, nowadays, whether should we continue to develop the economy or should we stop its development at all and pay closer attention to environmental problems has become a controversial issue. My view is that the economic growth is necessary for the development of our society.
Firstly, people’s basic needs, such as food, clothes and houses could be satisfied only by producing more products, in other words, developing our economy. Now everyone can buy a pair of leather boots if they need them to keep their feet warm in the winter but leather boots were very luxurious back in the early 20th century that only the rich could afford them. This is because now we can produce much more boots than we could before, and I own that to economic growth.
Moreover, as the economy develops, more and more advanced technology that aim to protect the environment have emerged. For example, electric cars, which are powered only by renewable energy, have become a new trending choice for many who wish to buy a new car. With the existence of these environmentally-friendly products, we will surely reduce our carbon emissions and manage to save the world from being drowned by the rising sea.
That is not to say that developing economy is a perfect solution for the pollution and other environmental problems that we are facing. Of course, we need to pay closer attention to those economic activities which would damage the nature, such as excessive mining and deforestation, but we could not go to extremes and give up all the economic growth.
In summary, we should put all our efforts into developing the economy and elevating people’s living standard, because that’s the only way to increase the productivity and develop technologies. Meanwhile, we need to pose restrictions to all the economic activities, such as setting standard for carbon emission, in order to make sure that we do not make destructive damage to the environment. Only by doing so can we sustain a huge population and figure out how to deal with those damages that already have been done.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in summary, of course, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99722222222 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91461700468 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552777777778 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6984905748 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195661731409 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735429409056 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507003997624 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112671439173 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517495028506 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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